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YoriYakuza

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This is so intense and cinematic, I love it. The balancing is perfect, and you built up tension properly. The piano lines are so somber and epic, yet uplifting in a way. Lots of reverb too to acquire that snowy feeling. That drop at 2:06 hits like a truck! The birds are a nice touch too. Overall super well done!

Ooo Psytrance, I love it!

DaveJMusic responds:

This isn't actually Psytrance, this is (or at least should be) Hypertechno, but I'm glad you like it! It's on Spotify, iTunes and more by the way! :)

Damn, this is fire! Could use a little variation though, so it doesn't get repetitive.

UTS-T responds:

I agree... not my best song 🤷‍♂️

What did you use for the guitars? Am I hearing Shreddage?

Electrotatary responds:

yes

Very bouncy!

This is actually really good! It reminds me of some RPG music or Pokémon battle themes. Overall, really enjoyable and fun to listen to. However, I would suggest changing up the drum pattern. It gets quite repetitive. Other than that, good job!

May I suggest using more sounds through the song, as well as making it slightly less repetitive? That main synth lead kind of wears on you after a while. I would change the melody at around 0:43 and 1:25. I like the change up at 1:47, and the extra synth layer. Overall, not bad, especially for just getting Serum. Just focus on maybe some theory or song writing techniques to further your future projects. Good work!

Aszon responds:

Hey! Thanks for the advice! I'm currently reworking the entire mix and master (again) and will add your suggestions. Thank you!!

The mix is pretty muddy, and those kicks and snares need to be boosted some, I think. Overall though, I think this is a great track, feels uplifting, yet sad. Good work!

Love ambience like this. It's dark, and fits the atmosphere perfectly! The bit crushed lead/synth gets a little annoying though, maybe change that up? It's great otherwise.

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